Introduction

   I've been quite lax with my posts so I thought with an impending deadline I'd keep you up to date. Last month we had a lesson in which we learnt the correct content for our introduction sections. This included detail on our investigation topic and what we would actually be looking at. For our hypothesis, and methodology sections we had to include relevant linking to theorists as well as stating how we were going to select a representative sample of data. Luckily Jill gave us an example sheet to fill in beforehand! 

   The next week we handed in our drafts and later that week we received them back with loads of feedback. Jill stressed the importance of stating that the project was language based but I had put this in my introduction so I didn't have to worry! However I still had plenty of improvements to make! My feedback included more specification on the type of books and theorists I had written about as well as needing to state why I had chosen to something. 

   I've made all my amendments and will post a copy of both my first and second drafts.